United States • 22 y/oReviews Given
You know, for something not profound, this is actually pretty good. You're not wrong.
Excellent. I did notice the stages of grief while I was reading, but it felt smooth. The style was cohesive and I enjoyed the way you depicted how a tree might feel about things and view its life.
This isn't necessarily my usual taste in genres, but I really like your writing style! Holding off on the reveal of the finger was a good call; I liked the surprise of realizing what the character is holding onto. I'm not sure I entirely understand this story, haha, but I enjoyed it!
Ha! I wasn't expecting that. Good writing.
Your comments are kinda hilarious, especially because I know exactly what it's like to cringe at my old writing. It's pretty interesting and satisfying to see that your old stuff isn't THE WORST EVER writing, but that the new is so much better. It's always fun to see how you've improved.
I don't really remember the story, except that I read it, but I'm sure it's worth salvaging/redoing if you're invested in it.
To me, this read like a fever dream. I'm not sure I understood what was happening. It was interesting, though.