Lev821

Well written. Points out the fundamental reality of nature, which is all things must have an opposite, including world peace. Watch how a dog will rush the fence barking, and growling when another dog walks past, and maybe sometimes they wag tales, and sniff each other through the fence. people do the same thing whether on the level of one on one or whole countries. Enjoyable, easy read with a message attached to it.

Good story, and a great surprise ending. Also, was left with the question of whether it was simply an accident that Anthony got caught with the knife, or that Raymond had planned it all out. Great climax to the story. Well written, and easy to read. Entertaining.

It was good, liked the build up of suspense at the end!

Good story. Great dialogue, and the climax of the story is a surprise to the reader. Good job

loved this story

A nice cliché twist done a little differently, I really enjoyed reading this!

'A reputation with the locals' not 'in the locals.' That or 'a reputation in the area.'

You evoke the setting and the characters past experiences well. I like the way they think they've debunked the myth only to realise they havn't.

wow. this was spooky but it gave a good message!