United Arab Emirates • 26 y/oReviews Received
this story is... wow. im speechless. from the first sentence i was hooked and always wanted to know what happened next. one of the best things i read on this site, honestly. keep up the AMAZING WORK!!!! :)))
awww. So sweet.
As for improvement, I don't think there's anything to address. Good flow of words, details, emotion, etc...
Keep up the great work!
RELLY AWESOME!