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United States • 19 y/o
recommended by 4 out of 5 people
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Ouch I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.
Nice!
So well written. Could never tell you rushed it, loved it!
Very well written, I loved it!
Holy crap that was so good omg. The plot twist at the end was amazing and so creative
Wow you truly are becoming a good author. You still have a path to get there, but its closer than ever before Nice piece