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I like it! Genetic modification has wonders on a universe, not only that but you have managed to turn them into soldiers, it's wonderful! Very interesting. Shows everything from her perspective too, she hates what she is, what she's doing, but is powerless to stop it, whether by choice or force. That is at least how I see it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

Just as good, if not better, than the first :)

That was really good!! Keep up the good work!

That was like a million thousand times better than I could do! soft me that was great.

*insert deviation of "haha" here*
Funny, nice one.
A little overused, but you played it out in such a way that it kinda went away from the norm.
Good One!
Can't wait for the next one.
Keep writing! We will keep reading!