scorp

That was wonderful. More than I've questioned whether mirrors are portals to parallel dimensions. Whether we humans in this dimension are parallel reflections of those in another. Well done.

I enjoyed that. Well done.

epiko

i love how you've captured the pressure of doing good in school with no regard to wellness as a person...I totally understand where you're coming from, my parents are harsh about grades too :) Good work on this one! Keep writing!

I really enjoyed your story. Well done.

I have to keep telling myself you are 14 years old. This is beautifully and expertly written. The imagery jumps off the page.