United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
short and simple, but strong and powerful! Bravo!
I have to keep telling myself you are 14 years old. This is beautifully and expertly written. The imagery jumps off the page.
oh my god, i LOVE your details like the thumb brushing against the dream catcher, and how this captures the feeling of september so so well. you are a lovely, lovely writer :)
I could feel mei's pain and could smell the nasty polluted air great description!
yesssss. can't wait to read more
I love your writing style and i enjoyed the story a bunch!
