United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
periodt.
short but well written. you have a talent for getting across what you mean with just a few words. great twist at the end :D
yes this needed to be said.
yes.... yes! YES!
Ouch
I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.
Gentle reminder: Be careful when you rhyme, sometimes it IS really hard to find a rhyming word that makes sense and doesn't upset the grammar of English. Otherwise great job!
