United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
This is really beautiful. I can't really tell if you were meaning to write about yourself, or about someone else, or both, but I think that either way this is a very powerful work. It really painted a picture for me, and I think others would agree.
I. Love. This. Poem.
nice.
Wow you truly are becoming a good author. You still have a path to get there, but its closer than ever before
Nice piece
Holy crap that was so good omg. The plot twist at the end was amazing and so creative
that was amazing! good job
