United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
I thought it was about break up till I read the last line... Short and great, keep it up.
This is good.
please continue this story it is sooo good!
I liked it! Its got a nice soothing feel towards it. Leaves the reader looking for something.
This is really good.
You evokr the setting very well. I could imagine myself there.
A lot of writers feel like this at times. I sometimes do. For a recent story I wstched a documentary about lifeboat crews, then used a similat scenario in my story 'Dark Midwinter Night.' The story took a respectable number of hits but not as many as some of mine and not as many as I hoped for. Pethaps I didn't convey all I wanted to. What do other people think?