United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
It's not... not that bad. I mean, you tried. THat's most that counts. Nice little baby thriller. You could probably scare a squirrel.
No hard Feelings
Well there aren't many things that can scare me but It was still well written.
Damn!
If my mom did that to my stuff, SHE WOULD NOT HEAR THE END OF IT!
Also a very well written and emotional story.
good story
*insert deviation of "haha" here*
Funny, nice one.
A little overused, but you played it out in such a way that it kinda went away from the norm.
Good One!
Can't wait for the next one.
Keep writing! We will keep reading!
