scorp

Ouch

I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.

periodt.

yes this needed to be said.

it made me cry as that is my current mood right now

yes.... yes! YES!

Its a good piece. The way the monster is described as being one and none is very interesting. To be honest I had to re-read a bit because I read the last line with a British accent and I was pretty sure that wasn't how it was supposed to go down, but that doesn't throw the quality down in any way.
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