United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
this was amazing i felt like you could have made the story longer but other then that it was good
but u ATEEE
A lot of young people will relate to this. Its quite usual to break up with someone while in your teens. The trouble is, if its your first break up you've nothing to compare it with and no experience of getting over it. Give yourself time to reflect and recover. It won't seem like it now, but there's time to move on and meet someone else.
I sincerety hope things get better for you soom Scorp. The word weept should be wept but that's a minor issue. I think you're showing courage and resiliance but I wish yoi didn't have to.
This is fine descriptive writing and a good coming of age piece. I hope you keep writing like this.