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Wow, I really liked this one. Thanks for putting it out here!
And I'd probably be the daughter. Always whining and groaning about stuff.
Either way, great story!

This was different from most stories. It has a really deep meaning and it was beautifully written. Good job!

My question is how do make poetry look so easy this is incredible

I genuinely laughed. This was very sweet and I really enjoyed it

damn.
that was dark, but really good.

this was really interesting and it got me inspired! nice

This was really interesting and strangely beautiful! Awesome.

I swear to god my mouth dropped open. holy...ok wow this was amazing! Love the details. Keep it up :)