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Beautifully written.

huzza. I need more!

wow. noice.

Touched my heart. I'm so sorry. My grandmother passed away not a long time ago and I know how much it hurts. Keep these memories close and keep up the great writing!

- Zero

This is so good! I know this was written a long time ago and the author probably won't even see this, but it is AWESOME. Believe me, I've tried writing poems that rhymed, and it's hard.
But this person made it look easy!
Anyways, one of the best poems I've read so far.

This story is lovely! True friendship.

aw, so sweet!

Just the beginning is awesome. I can't even imagine the next part. I CAN'T WAIT! What happens next?