United Kingdom • 20 y/oReviews Given
i feel like if you had just tried to take a little more time to mabey add some rhymes in there then it might become more gripping.
I've never read any of your other poems before this one so I can't comment on the others yet or compare this one to them but I thoroughly enjoyed this and didn't want to stop reading it if I'm honest I didn't want it to end. :)