France • 63 y/oReviews Received
This was a good story! I would appreciate if you’d continue it as well! Keep up the good work! Have a nice day!👋ðŸ½
The amazing and mysterious ending!!!
I love reading this one!
Really enjoyed... Please write more of this. I would love to read more!
I completely agree with @Rosemary99
Brilliant Job!!!
This is very clever and is complete as it is. I enjoyed the twists and turns laid to throw the reader off course.
I love the feel-good depiction of being surrounded by nature that you evoke.
A very moving account of such poignant events. So intimately written I accompanied you on this journey.
What a powerful piece of writing. The narrative told in such a detached way portrays so accurately the story teller's mindset.
Really liked this piece. I liked the pace of it and the heart racing and then slower scenes. Really nice work. You could even draw out the action packed scenes a little more. Can't wait to see more of your work.
This is softly heartbreaking, I loved it.