France • 63 y/oReviews Received
What a powerful piece of writing. The narrative told in such a detached way portrays so accurately the story teller's mindset.
I'm actually surprised with how this concluded, needless to say how I expected it to end was spun around a 180. I really liked this little story, and I agree with Rosemary, that it is complete in itself, great work and I can't wait to see what comes next.
This is very clever and is complete as it is. I enjoyed the twists and turns laid to throw the reader off course.
The amazing and mysterious ending!!!
I love reading this one!
Really enjoyed... Please write more of this. I would love to read more!
I completely agree with @Rosemary99
Brilliant Job!!!
This was a good story! I would appreciate if you’d continue it as well! Keep up the good work! Have a nice day!👋ðŸ½
Good story, with several excellent twists, but it's complete in itself. I wouldn't continue.