Reviews Given
An honestly-written heart-felt account. Thank you for sharing.
Great - Very vivid imagery!
Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)
I enjoyed it.
One thing I noticed though was maybe a little too much description at the intense moments e.g. "...entering the water, if only up to the laces of her hazel brown walking boots". In my opinion, it detracted from the tension. In other parts though your descriptions worked well.
Not normally a great lover of poetry, but I thought this was great. Well done!
Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!
Great short story. I liked much of the description throughout and also the hopeful ending
That is so sad Ivy. I hope writing it was therapeutic for you.