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Lussac

Lussac is from FR France • 62 y/o

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"Just Get Out of Bed?" - Depression and Mindfulness by npadlo

An honestly-written heart-felt account. Thank you for sharing.

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Loop by magnamata

Great - Very vivid imagery!

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O for OBSTACLE by Neil K Spencer

Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)

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The Girl in the Sea by Neil K Spencer

I enjoyed it.
One thing I noticed though was maybe a little too much description at the intense moments e.g. "...entering the water, if only up to the laces of her hazel brown walking boots". In my opinion, it detracted from the tension. In other parts though your descriptions worked well.

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My Brain, The Dictator by aquietvoice

Not normally a great lover of poetry, but I thought this was great. Well done!

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The Hiding Place by Kimberly Owen

Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!

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Under the Street Light by Kimberly Owen

Great short story. I liked much of the description throughout and also the hopeful ending

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Do You Love Yourself? by Ivy Lena

That is so sad Ivy. I hope writing it was therapeutic for you.

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