France • 61 y/oReviews Given
brilliant start. Please write some more....
Very powerful piece of writing!
Looking forward to Part II
Is she going to be banished from the Fairy world?
I agree that this could be outstanding if developed further. Obviously, it seems a little confusing at first as we are bombarded with so many fantasy characters so quickly, but there is an awful lot of good stuff here to work with.... Please stick with it and tell us some more.....
please have courage Kkliz
Keep writing, it can be very therapeutic
So so sad..... You are very talented SamZ.
I liked the build up of the story, all except for the last line; I think the ending needs some more work to make it 'complete' I'm sure it will be worth it!
I loved this story; one of the best I've read here to date. Well done!
Well done Paul, I like the way you built up your characters