France • 62 y/oReviews Given
How tragic! And I love the end too....
Very well written, you have talent. I hope I can read some more of your stories.
I'm just wondering why you classed this as 'religious'?
Anyway, so far so good, I look forward to reading more
I like the 'honesty' of your style.
If this is autobiographical, I feel for you. Have courage, you'll find other like-minded souls along the way....
And carry on writing!
I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing your memory with us all.
I liked this story.
That is so sad Ivy. I hope writing it was therapeutic for you.
Great short story. I liked much of the description throughout and also the hopeful ending
Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!