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Not normally a great lover of poetry, but I thought this was great. Well done!

I enjoyed it.
One thing I noticed though was maybe a little too much description at the intense moments e.g. "...entering the water, if only up to the laces of her hazel brown walking boots". In my opinion, it detracted from the tension. In other parts though your descriptions worked well.

Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)

Great - Very vivid imagery!

An honestly-written heart-felt account. Thank you for sharing.

Very well written.
Are you going to go further with the story?

Are you going to carry on with your story?

I liked this. Very brave of you to continue actually writing whilst experiencing rough turbulence... although I imagine it must have been quite therapeutic.
I just noticed one tiny detail.... did you really have a 'handle' on your mug of tea???