Good grammar makes a good story. Bad grammar makes a bad story and this is bad grammar. Not saying it has to be perfect, but some things just bother readers especially when it comes to punctuation, proper nouns, spelling, all that good stuff.
I like the idea, but I believe it was poorly executed.
mirrors are a worth of reflection of memory
I liked to write a review
as the bathroom scene was fun
like in the mirror is real
would see no other but you