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matthewmeager

matthewmeager is from US United States • 29 y/o

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Millieywqq
Millieywqq reviewed CONCRETE ANGEL

This story, should be read by everyone. It is told beautifully. I started crying a little...

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hercules
hercules reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

AWESOME!!!!!!!! That was a great story.

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cricket
cricket reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

wow i love this

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Justice_Arabia
Justice_Dolly reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

That was amazing.. Please continue this.

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Millionshatterpieces
Millionshatterpieces reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

OMG I NEED MORE PLEASE

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Myrawiles
Myrawiles reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

Good job

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Millieywqq
Millieywqq reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

Please write more!!!!!!!

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Kaleighishappy
Kat reviewed SCHOOL'S BATHROOM MIRRORS

I think that though you do need to work on the grammar and punctuation and sentencing, there is a great idea implanted in your writing. I suggest making this the prompt for a new story.
You could start out with the boy not thinking that the story was true, and entering the abandoned bathroom. This way the reader is still creeped out and worried for the main character.
You could also use an age for the boy (both of them), and tell why the boy in the mirror is first off in the mirror and second whh he skipped his classes.
Great work, can't wait to hear more!

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