melissak

I'm so intrigued to read more about Lu. I would've put more description into the hideout where she saw the stares personally, but that's just how I am. I already have an idea of there looks besides the boy without green eyes and Henna. It's so interesting

Sir Ayren seems like one of those people I read in mangas who are crooks. I'm not sure if he just seems that way or if he's actually a crook. I'm very interested in the boy with green eyes. I can already imagine the boy without a description. Also, did you mean: "a white woman with sleeves" instead of "a with woman with sleeves"

It seems like she's more worried about fashion and herself than the boy, who is yet to be named. She seems to be moving too fast into acceptance then she would be in real life. I would think she's still in shock and less worried about her wardrobe. It's a good book though and I hope you continue. Seems like somethings missing though, something crucial, but I can't put my finger on it.

Honestly, I struggle with names all the time. I always search up: Random guy (or girl) names. That way it's easier. I only do it when I draw a blank on names though

I love this book. The separation, details, and the characters. I'm not one to really understand big words or stories, even though I love them all, but it's still great. I'm intrigued, it reminds me of my view when I was a child. I was poor without parents, even though I wasn't an orphan, and could barely survive. It's sad, but relatable to many people. I wanna see where this book is going. I'm glad I was able to make time for reading it. :)

love it <3

OH!!! whos Roy? ;) ;)

I got a bit confused at the end, but overall I liked it