India • 30 y/oReviews Received
Really great! I loved the way the lines smoothed together. Very clever!
I love this!! A lot of people just chose off the "available list" but what's that? you need to wait for mr. right!
I liked the message, and the fact that it is a true story makes it both better and worse- better because of how real it is, and worse because of how real it is.
I liked how a lot of your lines held meaning, good use of diction. Decent poem
i love the way it was righten, hart braking that it was a true story but it makes the image it that much more real
Reads like it happened in real life. I liked that. You have some typos and other errors throughout that I would recommend that you polish and revise. Good luck on your writing!