Philippines • 25 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
A nice poem - but take more care with your punctuation. I look forward to reading more of your work in future :-)
I fear you may alienate more than you'll draw in with this piece. Religion is always a contentious subject and seemingly ramming your beliefs down the throats of your readers is not a good means by which to endear yourself. There are other, more subtle but equally effective ways of putting your message across without being so bullish about it.
Happiness is journey..... I respect one's thinking.. And that is why i will not comment on your quote.
Love yourself like you were never been hurt.....but don't forget.... You were been hurt....and also the person responsible for that.
Not with the moto of revenge but for a happy and uniform journey (as you said).
Strongly written. I do like it.
Let's not give ourselves and our fate to an 'idea' that is GOD.
Let us believe in our destiny and more forward in the path which we feel is right
Good job! Really took the reader through the emotions. Thanks for sharing!
-KP