Reviews Received
I think this is written quite well! I appreciate that, at least to me, it seems like more of an observation of pain than a description of it (if that makes any sense). It's interesting. While it's not really the tone that I like most of the time, it was enjoyable to read nonetheless. Keep up the good work!
I like the idea, and it was super intriguing! Some things could be clearer, but for a first draft, It's pretty amazing. I just have so many questions about the main character that I don't have answers to yet because there isn't more of this story.
So yeah. Keep writing.