Amber Jones

Wow. This is such an remarkable interpretation and expression. Also, interesting style of poetry.

Way to truly speak your mind here! Sometimes that's hard to do in this world when people shut down your opinion without really giving you a chance to express them. Good job.

Maybe I’m biased because you’re my friend, but I really enjoyed this story. It could use some grammatical editing, but overall the story was interesting and I enjoyed it.

I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!

Very different style of writing than I'm used to, probably could use some grammar touch ups, but other than that I loved it!
I´m a little bit of a Hamilton nerd because my sister used to listen to it all of the time...XD...Gotta love Hamilton

I liked the idea behind this story! A lot of times the story is about a series of tasks that a young man has to do in order to win the lady's hand in marriage, often organized by her father, then an unlikely candidate presents himself and succeeds. So it was intriguing that the young women was directly involved with the challenge and probably initiated it herself which means she honestly wanted to get married, but also wanted to find someone who was willing to work for her hand as well as demonstrate promise of a loving and compassionate relationship.
So, yeah. This was super interesting! Good job!

I think that's the hardest part about caring so much about someone when we have to learn to move on without them. When you have to almost hold yourself together because it would seem that a fraction of your very reality has crumbled. It hurts, but you just have to keep telling yourself that it's ok.
At least, that's how I have experienced it to be.

This is so true! Music has such a magnificent way of communicating not only to hearts, but our minds and our souls. It has a way of lifting us up, telling a story, and carrying us on a wave of melody. It's truly amazing...