United States • 20 y/oReviews Given
Very different style of writing than I'm used to, probably could use some grammar touch ups, but other than that I loved it!
I´m a little bit of a Hamilton nerd because my sister used to listen to it all of the time...XD...Gotta love Hamilton
I like the way you tried to improve your rhyming skills! Good job!
Maybe I’m biased because you’re my friend, but I really enjoyed this story. It could use some grammatical editing, but overall the story was interesting and I enjoyed it.
Way to truly speak your mind here! Sometimes that's hard to do in this world when people shut down your opinion without really giving you a chance to express them. Good job.