Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

As usual you write vivid descriptions, and the central character's decline is renfered convincingly.

As before, you evoke the setting beautifully. I like the metaphore of the worne globe

I like your descriptions, they are so vivid I can imagine that I'm there. When it comes to the plot,I'm coming in part way through but it reads promising from here.

This is an atmospheric, imaginative piece. You make good use of other senses besides sight. Keep it up.

Beautiful and inspirational!

I love the flowy, beautiful writing of your poem <3

I enjoyed that. Well done.

Short and to the haunting point...