United Kingdom • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
You did an amazing job at pulling the reader into the scene, it was lovely :)
Well. I'm not sure how to say what I'm feeling, so I'll say I love it and hope that says what it should. Seriously, this was so overwhelmingly descriptive! I love the feel of it, it's just so good!
Are all your stories this descriptive? I feel like if you wrote a book I'd read it even just because you seem to know how to describe things meticulously and yet make it so engaging. I certainly feel like I've seen this theater before.
These are original stories, right?
The Hunger Games!
And, wow, so poetic! I absolutely love the details. Keep up the awesome work!
I don't understand how this is rated 18+ please point out the hints for me if i'm missing a big part of the story.
Beautiful.
Ohhhh boy. This is a good intro! It actually sets up a nice haunted-house-ghostbusters-luigi's-mansion-scooby-doo sorta story. Many different paths open, and many different options ahead.
However you say it's gonna have murder and stuff.
So scrap all that and replace it with some deep crap. Maybe some Us, and stuffs.
Otherwise, you got a nice setup!
Keep writing! And we will keep reading!
This is very well written. I thoroughly recommend it.