United States • 26 y/oReviews Received
Confusing, hard to read, and I did not like the story line. It just didn't make sense! Don't worry, with practice, you'll get better.
The concept you have is a good one but there is too much grammar errors that is hard for me to fully enjoy. Do not fright. I suggest that you ask for an overlook before sumbiting your work to help you out. I do hope to read more of your work in the future. You got this!
-Fate🌸