This one was better at the vocabulary than the last one and I enjoyed them both. Great Job! can't wait for a chapter three!
In the smoothly paragraph there are two the's in it in like sentence 8 but I still enjoyed the story.
I love this story
I actually cried as I was reading this story it was so heart warming.But because of my parents we had to get rid of three of our dogs two of our cats and my horse. I cried and cried because I had no bestfriend to be with me. We then got another cat and I hope we get to keep her till her life ends. I miss my animals so much I always talk about how great they were and how they were always there to help. the biggest dog we gave away is now a rescue dog and the two little ones well one went to my uncle and another one went to a friend.The friend is rebecca forgey she was attacked by 4 pits and this was two weeks after they got my dog and my dog sat on her bed and waited for her to come home from the hospital. Look on google for rebecca forgey and the pit bull accident. It will help you out with what all happened to her. My horse we gave to people that would take great care of her and love and charish her. I always wanted to be a vet and marine biologist and I thank you for your heart warming story
This is a very heartwarming story, Animals mean the world to me. Anytime I see one that was abandoned and left on the street I always just want to give it the help it needs. But of course mom says we cant but I have always wanted to be a vet or a marine biologist to help those animals that are in need. Animals to me mean bestfriend and family so never forget them. Animals mean more than people to me, the reason for that is because I get bullied and the only thing that is there for me are my animals.
ever since I have started high school I have been bullied and I have someone in my life that cares about me so much and his name is prestyn. we have been talking for a while but he always helps me get through my worst times when i really need him so many people have betrayed me and your story to me was so inspiring. it helps me know how much many people love me and it helps me know that people really care and it doesn't matter if a couple dont like me and i really loved reading your story I have made many stories of my own if you want to check them out just look me up and you will find my stories on here. thank you for your hard work you put into this