United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
This one was better at the vocabulary than the last one and I enjoyed them both. Great Job! can't wait for a chapter three!
In the smoothly paragraph there are two the's in it in like sentence 8 but I still enjoyed the story.
ever since I have started high school I have been bullied and I have someone in my life that cares about me so much and his name is prestyn. we have been talking for a while but he always helps me get through my worst times when i really need him so many people have betrayed me and your story to me was so inspiring. it helps me know how much many people love me and it helps me know that people really care and it doesn't matter if a couple dont like me and i really loved reading your story I have made many stories of my own if you want to check them out just look me up and you will find my stories on here. thank you for your hard work you put into this
I really enjoyed this story!. I had it bookmarked a while back and just opened up my bookmarks. I am sorry I had not said anything about it before. I hope that you will write more stories!
wow this was a wonderful story
Great job on your story i reccomended it i favorited it and i also wrote this review