Reviews Received
Stumbled upon your stories by chance, you have a real gift for words! I very much like how you draw out the moments to give the full impact; thanks for sharing your gifts!
I have officially read everything you have put on your profile so far (because if I read one story from someone and get hooked I can't stop) and right now I think you write a lot of really sad stories. Can I dare you to write a happy one? Just a dare.
Anyway, I love the use of words and the way you describe his backstory and desicion. Gosh that's a sad ending.
-KP
Oh my gosh. I think I'm obsessed with your writing. Good capture of the details and you make everything seem real, and make a clear picture in my mind. Awesome!
That was awesome! I love the way that you described everything and know that you are undoubtedly an even more creative writer now that you have the experience and stuff. Wow, that sounded cheap. Anyway, I'm a part of a big (extended) family, with around 40 relatives. I love life sometimes, especially when life involves being awoken by a butt in your face and a sibling telling you they lost the remote. XD sarcasm, life's relief.