United States • 25 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Oh my gosh. I think I'm obsessed with your writing. Good capture of the details and you make everything seem real, and make a clear picture in my mind. Awesome!
I have officially read everything you have put on your profile so far (because if I read one story from someone and get hooked I can't stop) and right now I think you write a lot of really sad stories. Can I dare you to write a happy one? Just a dare.
Anyway, I love the use of words and the way you describe his backstory and desicion. Gosh that's a sad ending.
-KP
Stumbled upon your stories by chance, you have a real gift for words! I very much like how you draw out the moments to give the full impact; thanks for sharing your gifts!
This isn't a story though.
Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job
This was a good storie...I never wrote many stories mine suck...but this is very good please check out some of my stories and message me so I can get some good ideas...
Love,
Maddie â¤ï¸