United States • 25 y/o • MaleReviews Received
So sad and written so well. Story well told.
A really good and sad story
This is a very good poem and I love all of your stories this one reminds me of well me
Beautiful story, and sad ending. Just the kind of story i like!
I can relate.. but not with missing someone.. For me its rejection and never being loved ever, which left me broken
but on a positive note
I liked how you wrote this though :)
A story with a ring of truth about it, perhaps. I think your pen name on this site says a lot about how you view yourself as a person.
Good Luck,
Mike.
This was very moving and it was well written. The ending was wonderful and by far my favorite part!
It's amazing, nice story development, really made me understand why he wanted to kill himself that badly. However, I would suggest that you should elaborate the part where the mother blamed the boy a little bit more, but nice story!! Keep going ;)