United States • 20 y/oReviews Received
huzza. I need more!
love this, it made me think and it wasn't to obvious. i definitely recommended it.
I feel like you could, and should. You mention Fate, but not like fate. You use it as a person, or a something. So that begs the question of what is doing this? I feel like you could go places with this one. Keep Writing! We will keep reading!
Good job! Maybe a bit too long to be called a short story though.