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Great structure, plot development, and imaging. Good character descriptions. Wonderful, gritty story. I like the reality. Great punctuation, and dialogue. I also liked the positive ending that leaves the reader with the assumption the main character had been set free, as in released from a prison, and would be starting a new life . Given a second chance. Great writing in my opinion.
You are a very good writer. The structure of this story is great as have been the other two stories of yours I have read. the first half of the story leads the reader into a completely different assumption of what to expect from what actually gets revealed. It captures your interest with intrigue , and then descends into melancholy romance which ends just right without becoming stilted. Great writing.
Wonderful story, and the dialogue, including the accents was great. Good description. Excellent structure. There were some grammatical errors that editing would fix, but excellent writing in my opinion.
Great imagery! Hope there is more to come.
Very well written. Tragic, and true in instances. I liked the sudden revelation that Rose had actually killed her abusive husband. No prelude leading up to it, just wham, and then no wind down. Made me wonder how many people exist like this, and of course the bird is in such contrast to her. Great story.
Very good writing. Great structure. Descriptive, yet not overly so, and spread throughout the story. Good plot. I felt like her mysterious disappearances at night needed a bit more development to tie it in with the betrayal at the end of the story, but the suspense was still good. I look forward to reading your other stories.
A fun, light, humorous story. I liked the unexpected part when the sister revealed she had given the drunken note to the neighbor. In my opinion, the story should also be labeled as a romance as it leans that way, but not too far, thankfully. There are a couple of typos you may want to fix. Good writing.
Good story. Great dialogue, and the climax of the story is a surprise to the reader. Good job