P. F.

Good story. Had a great twist in it that catches the reader by surprise. Good structure. Whether by intent or not, I was left wondering if Lucy had come into the city for random entertainment, or if she had the same intent as Max. I certainly detected a bit of irony in the story, also. Good job.

A fun read, and the revealing truth of the doctor's attitude is true to form. I always feel like just another animal in the herd when I go to the doctor. I like the way the wife derailed his cattle call method of consulting. Good story.

Good story, and a great surprise ending. Also, was left with the question of whether it was simply an accident that Anthony got caught with the knife, or that Raymond had planned it all out. Great climax to the story. Well written, and easy to read. Entertaining.

Well written. Points out the fundamental reality of nature, which is all things must have an opposite, including world peace. Watch how a dog will rush the fence barking, and growling when another dog walks past, and maybe sometimes they wag tales, and sniff each other through the fence. people do the same thing whether on the level of one on one or whole countries. Enjoyable, easy read with a message attached to it.

Good story. Great dialogue, and the climax of the story is a surprise to the reader. Good job