Reviews Received
I thought the story was rather good in my opinion. I liked the theme of this piece, you had very good description. I don't think it got to a point of unbearable 'preachy' tone. Keep writing, I like the direction this story is going!
Brilliantly written! Glorious! Great use of words and imageries! I can imagine all this stuff happening. The way you write is fabulous. Starting the story with such a serene description of nature makes the story so irresistible.