Bangladesh • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Excellent!
Indeed, it can be observed that the greatest of men treat the physically disabled/challenged harshly. The entire society views them as useless brats born to die without honour.
This piece of writing briefly describes this bitter and cruel truth in elegant words.
But, there are some mistakes present in the writing.
"...as painful and anything inflicted by a real weapon."
In many instances, you forget the Oxford Comma.
Oh, My God! I couldn't stop laughing for about 5 minutes while and after reading this impossibly comical story! I loved your writing style, aH! ***ahahaha*** excuse me, I have to LAUGH A LOT.
A lovely piece of satire!
It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.
Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.