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I never understood why everyone blames people who commit suicide, or call them cowards. It is a terrifying thing to hold a knife to yourself or to tie a rope knowing its going to hurt, hoping it doesn't hurt as bad as everything else had prior. The real problem will always be those you see the problem and do nothing anyways.
I like this alot, thank you for sharing it.
This is a nice piece. It seems like it could work well as an illustrated children's story. Well done.
I like some of the imagery and imaginative use of metaphors, like "I'm a forgotten picture frame." Overall, however, it's rather glum and self-pitying, and it seems a bit lazy with phrases like "I'm just so lonely."