United States • 31 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
You know I always love your work. This is is just great.
It was great!!! I loved it! I hope over to hear more from you!
Love it so far!
Great story I love the ending!!!!
That made my heart glow in a weird way. I know people like this and they SUCK. Anyway, thanks!!!! Loved it!!!
Hahaha....Yes
Fabulous! (later edit 11/05/16)) Having re-read this I 'saw' more than the first time. Although not my 'cup of tea' I appreciate your skill in writing in this genre. You have a fabulous imagination, which comes across vividly in your story.
I loved the concept behind this clever story, Rebs. I think the execution is a little 'clunky' in places as the flow of the story 'hiccups'. In saying that, though, I was hooked into the story right to the end, so that's to your credit.
A judicious edit and a little polishing would make this good story into a fabulous one :-)