robertmoons

A brilliant idea and well written.

Wow. This is a very well done story. The alien creature who lives to kill, nourished by bloodshed. It drew me in right away and made my mind's eye dwell with the writer for a while, using the words to make the written word come to life inside my head, like a movie. Nicely done!

Very well written. I love the plot. Great job!

A well written, entertaining story, easy to read. I didn't quite understand the ending regarding 1945. Some obscure meaning I didn't understand, but not a story killer. Good job.

The prose and format are pretty good, and were appreciated. Sadly I did not only find the overdose of aliens & superpowers to lower the value aka quality of it, but got a bit bored by the lengthy intro.

For some reason I got the intuitive hint at 'Jack the Ripper' early on, and I had the feeling I had read this story before.

Invincible killers who get away with everything, just like invincible vigilantes who are never really endangered, can reduce the thrill of a story.

To me this is a 3 star story at the very best, but it being the first I read on this website I assign 4 stars.

OH MY GOSH I FEEL THAT WAY!! That's hallarious! I love the way that you made the reader feel bad for the character, and then all the sudden feels stupid for believing it. I love the way that you put that.
There was one grammatical error I found, in the first few paragraphs. You used the wrong 'there.' It was 'their' but supposed to be 'there.'
Great job! Can't wait to read more!!
-KP

I love this lmaoo so funny