United States • 25 y/oReviews Received
Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic
Very good. This hits home - hard! Poignant and well-written (take care with your punctuation though!). I liked this a lot.
This is an interesting poem, but please take care with your wording. This sentence - "Cause she comes from such afar" - is grammatically incorrect and the word 'such' is unnecessary. Overall a good job :-)