United Kingdom • 37 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This poem is beautiful, sad, and can really get some of your emotions kicking! I enjoyed this poem! Keep up the work, have a nice day, be safe.
So sincere and loving! Makes the reader wonder more about what happened! The lines didn't feel forced and the words flowed brilliantly! I loved it!!
What a beautiful poem! I enjoyed the use of the capitalized 'She' as kiraafinifrock had stated. It makes it seem like the person you are speaking of is very important in your life. It makes the poem more touching and sincere. Great job!
You really showed the battle of overcoming who you once were and accepting yourself so you can feel worthy to another person. You expressed the need you felt in a dark but somehow beautiful way. The fact that you capitalized "She" further showed how you felt toward this person. Seems to me a poem of longing. I enjoyed it.