Reviews Given
This is really cool it has every element inside the words your right sad emotional but a feel good after.Thnks
Well! that was very intensely written I have crept inside the words. You brought them to life thanks
Words very nicely done. I love Peacocks so much I even wrote a book on it.
Your story has a darkness that stays within you penned it well thanks.
Has a very refreshing mood of style and you have the beauty of the waves. I feel it hitting my face.
You have all the elements of darkness in your story I feel it was a nicely penned good job.