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Well! that was very intensely written I have crept inside the words. You brought them to life thanks

This is really cool it has every element inside the words your right sad emotional but a feel good after.Thnks

You have all the elements of darkness in your story I feel it was a nicely penned good job.

Has a very refreshing mood of style and you have the beauty of the waves. I feel it hitting my face.

Your story has a darkness that stays within you penned it well thanks.

Words very nicely done. I love Peacocks so much I even wrote a book on it.